Selasa, 22 Maret 2011

analisis discourse text 1

Analysis Commuters prefer staying in town to battling traffic
a. General analysis that can be found:
The background knowledge of this text is as everybody knows that in big town like Jakarta always traffic jam every day. So, the writer discuss this problem with the participants of the text are Ardy (a consultant in Jakarta who be a source of news or informant), Vera (an employee at a private company who be informant), and Alfian (who rents a room in Kebon Kacang who be informant). The setting is in Jakarta in the situation of Traffic Jam problem. The channel that be used by the writer to shown of the text is written in newspaper. The type of the paragraph is argumentative paragraph, so he purpose of the text is to persuade commuters in Jakarta to stay in town. The form and the content of the text is act sequence that devided into Introduction in paragraph 1, explaination is in next paragraph and the last paragraph is the Closing which content persuading act. From the information the readers who are the commuter can get the opportunity of staying in town. Like what I got when I stay in Jakarta for an event. Traffic jams really our close friend in there. So, I believe that staying near the office is the best solution to battling the traffic jam in Jakarta.
b. Deixis analysis each paragraph
I found some deixis and the I tried to analyse it. This is the result for each paragraph:
It appears Jakarta’s ever-worsening traffic and the high cost of commuting is prompting some commuting Jakartans to stay in the center of town, separated from their loved ones.
- Jakarta’s = spatial deixis/place
Paragraph 1, line 1
- Jakartans = spatial deixis/location
Paragraph 1, line 2
- Their = commuters Jakartan
Paragraph 1, line 2
- Loved ones = commuter’s family or commuter’s house
Paragraph 1, line 3
It tells about general condition in Jakarta that ever-worsening traffic and has high cost to live there. To battling it, the commuters choose to stay in the center of town.

Ardy Putra a consultant with a family living in Sunter, North Jakarta, stays in a rented room in Sudirman, Central Jakarta. He said, he made the move to reduce commuting costs and avoid the terrible snarls on the roads to downtown Jakarta. “I decided to rent a room at a boarding house in Sudirman a year ago so I could save time and money”. He told The Jakarta Post recently. The 30-year-old Ardy said that from the rented room He only had to walk 10 minutes to get to his office , his “Imagine if I had to leave everyday from my house in Sunter, it might take one or two hours to get here,” he said. The move actually may not have reduced his overall cost of living, but it has saved him a lot of time, Ardy said. “At least I don’t get old on the street,” he said. Traffic in the city is a major headache for the majority of Jakartans.
- ardy putra = personal deixis
paragraph 2, line 1
- sunter north Jakarta = spatial deixis
paragraph 2, line 1
- sudirman central Jakarta = spatial deixis
paragraph 2, line 2
- he = personal deixis
paragraph 2, line 2
- he = personal deixis
paragraph 2, line 2
- I = personal deixis
Paragraph 2, line3
- Sudirman = spatial deixis
Paragraph 2, line four
- A year ago = spatial deixis
Paragraph 2, line four
- I = personal deixis
Paragraph 2, line four
- He = personal deixis
Paragraph 2, line 5
- The Jakarta post = the newspaper which show the news
Paragraph 2, line 5
- The 30-year-old = temporal deixis (ardy’s age when conversation is written)
Paragraph 2, line 5
- He = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 5
- His = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 6
- His = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 6
- I = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 6
- Everyday = temporal deixis (Monday up to Friday)
Paragraph 2, line 6
- My = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 7
- Sunter = spatial deixis
Paragraph 2, line 7
- It = the time which is needed to move from ardi’s house to ardi’s office
Paragraph 2, line 7
- One or two hours = temporal deixis
Paragraph 2, line 7
- Here = spatial deixis (ardy’s office)
Paragraph 2, line 7
- He = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 7
- The move = the change from ardi’s house to ardy’s rent a room
Paragraph 2, line 7
- His = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 8
- It = the movement to a rent room
Paragraph 2, line 8
- Him = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 8
- At least = temporal deixis
Paragraph 2, line 9
- I = personal deixis (ardy)
Paragraph 2, line 9
- Do not get old on the street = membuang waktu dengan percuma karena macet di jalanan.
Paragraph 2, line 9
- Jakartans = personal deixis (people who live or work in Jakarta)
Paragraph 2, line 10
This paragraph tells us about rdy who lving in Sunter choose to stay in Jakarta to save time and money.

As of December 2010, there were more than 11 million vehicles in Jakarta: 9 million motorbikes, 3 million cars and 63.000 vehicles for public transportation. According to one’s estimation, 1.500 new motorcycles and more than 500 new cars are introduced to city’s streets every day. It has been predicted that by some time in 2011 there will be 12 million privately owned vehicles clogging the capital’s roads. Experts have warned that total gridlock could occur by 2014 if the rate of vehicle ownership continuous at current rates.
- December 2010 = temporal deixis
- Jakarta = spatial deixis
- every day = temporal deixis
- it = the amount of transportation
- in 2011 = temporal deixis
- by 2014 = temporal deixis
this paragraph tells us about the fact that of December 2010, there were more than 11 million vehicles in Jakarta: 9 million motorbikes, 3 million cars and 63.000 vehicles for public transportation and predicated that in 2011 there will be 12 million privately owned vehicles clogging the capital’s roads. Experts have warned that total gridlock could occur by 2014 if the rate of vehicle ownership continuous at current rates

Traffic in Jakarta is said to cost the city between Rp. 281 trillion (US$3 billion) and Rp. 46 trillion. The motorious congestion also causes losses of at least Rp. 9,7 trillion because of lost productivity, while looses related to health reached Rp. 5,8 trillion and public transportation owners suffered Rp. 1,9 trillion in losses.
- Traffic = main problem in Jakarta
Paragraph four, line 1
- Jakarta = spatial deixis/location
Paragraph four, line 1
This paragraph tells us that many affect that cause by traffic jam in Jakarta.
Vera Y.S., an employee at a private company in Central Jakarta , said She decided to rent near her office in Karet because she had given up after the traffic seemed to get worse by the day. “My family family lives in Cinere, Depok, which is actually not too far from Jakarta but you know I had to spent four and a half hours each day to drive to and from my office. I was exhausted from just driving to and from the city,” she said. Four years ago She decided that enough was enough and moved into a boarding house near her office The move was simply to save time and money, she said. She is single after all. But the money Vera saves from her shorter commute goes to financing the high cost of living in downtown Jakarta. “This is like a cross subsidy,” she said. For others, money is not an issue.
- Vera = personal deixis (subject)
Paragraph 1, line 1
- Central Jakarta = spatial deixis
Paragraph 1, line 1
- She = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 1
- Her = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 2
- Karet = spatial deixis (vera’s office)
Paragraph 1, line 2
- She = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 2
- My family = personal deixis (vera’s family)
Paragraph 1, line 3
- Cinere Depok = spatial deixis (place)
Paragraph 1, line 3
- Jakarta = spatial deixis (place)
Paragraph 1, line four
- You = personal deixis (irawati or writer)
Paragraph 1, line four
- I = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line four
- My office = personal deixis (vera’s office)
Paragraph 1, line four
- I = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 5
- She = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 5
- Four years ago = spatial deixis (in 1997)
Paragraph 1, line 5
- She = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 5
- Her = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 6
- The move = change from vera’s house to vera’s boarding house
Paragraph 1, line 6
- She = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 7
- She = personal deixis (vera)
Paragraph 1, line 7
- Her = vera
Paragraph 1, line 8
- She = vera
Paragraph 1, line 9
- Money is not an issue = money is real and need by every people.
Paragraph 1, line9
This paragraph tells us about Vera who chooses moving near her office to save tima and money.
Alfian, who rents a room in Kebon Kacang, Central jakarta, said he was not really concerned about saving money living in downtown Jakarta. “I am more concerned with the energy that I can save compared with if I go on living in Depok,” he said said. It now takes only 15 minutes of walking for him to get to the office, and living in downtown also offers a lot of perks, Alfian said. “Jakarta certainly has more places to hang out than Depok,”he said. =alfian said –JP/IRAWATY WARDANY-
- Alfian = personal deixis
Paragraph 6, line 1
- He = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line 1
- I am = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line 2
- I = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line 3
- I = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line 3
- He = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line 3
- It = the moving from alfian’s room to alfian’s office
Paragraph 6, line 3
- Him = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line four
- He = personal deixis (alfian)
Paragraph 6, line 5
This paragraph tells us about one of the commuters Jakartans, alfian, more concerned to energy that can save compare than when alfian living in Depok. Another reason why alfian choose to staying near his office in Jakarta is a lot of parks in Jakarta than Depok.

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